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About this program

Aim: The aim of this program is to help you plan your essay about "Radiohead's release of its latest album ''In Rainbows'' will significantly change the whole business model of the music industry". It will:

  1. help you to plan your essay
  2. help you to write your essay, including the Introduction, Body, and Conclusion.
  3. help you to proof-read your essay
  4. produce an essay, which you can save and print out using your browser's File menu.
  5. and speak your essay to you. You can choose a  male or female voice.

 

 

1. Plan your Essay: Drag and drop points to include in your essay

Drag and drop the points below that you want to include in your essay into the topic boxes on the right >

Radiohead's release of its latest album ''In Rainbows'' will significantly change the whole business model of the music industry
  • but: downloading music for a fixed amount/free not new
    • because: pay-as-you-wish for an album is still e-sales
  • but: junior artists sometimes offer free samplers
  • but: it's commercial suicide
    • but: it makes perfect business sense
      • because: new business strategy for new media - the Internet
      • because: make it easy for the band to manage distribution
        • because: future demand of the album will be low
          • because: fans either purchased box set or download
      • but: not applicable to many less famous artists
        • because: possible only with a huge fanbase like Radiohead
      • because: the band's vocal Thom Yorke actually offered free download...
      • because: free distribution is in fact more rewarding
        • because: popularizing the album
        • because: profit from sale of album is small
        • because: albums are only promotion for concert tickets
          • because: the Charlatans sold out tour w/ same strategy
          • because: Prince sold out his tour ticket w/ same strategy
      • because: even benefit from those who pay nothing
        • because: they will become further marketing target
          • because: registration of personal information is required
      • because: this strategy helps to band/its future label to evaluate...
        • because: information for scheduling world tour
        • because: allows fans to show their willingness to pay
      • because: novel way of sale draws world's attention
    • because: profit from sale is harmed
      • because: people tend not to pay, it's normal
      • because: more than 60% of fans pay nothing
        • but: it's in fact to the advantage of the band
          • but: but there are still costs for the making of the album,...
  • because: positive feedbacks from artists
    • but: James Blunt's negative view
      • but: Radiohead is still well-rewarded in money
    • because: David Bowie and Alex Turner are interested
    • because: praise from John Marr of Modest Mouse
  • because: Radiohead's 'free' album is a bold action
    • because: don't get why a Twins album costs more than HK$100
  • because: artistic success, critical acclaim
    • but: not deadline is terrifying
    • because: more freedom and time for working on the album
    • because: five stars from Guardians
    • because: most touching record since OK Computer
  • because: separation of big rock names from big labels
    • but: famous artists moved away from big labels also
    • because: no label deal for In Rainbows

Move to the next stage and write your essay.

The introduction will go here, but don't write it until you after have chosen your topics.

Topics: (drag points from the left into the topic boxes below. To delete a point, double-click the box, after the point's text):
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2. Write your essay

Introduction

Instructions: Fill in or edit these boxes so that the grammar is correct:

Move 1: Identify the topic / theme

First sentence: Why is the topic important? (e.g. Whether radiohead's release of its latest album ''In Rainbows'' will significantly change the whole business model of the music industry is currently a controversial topic.) Tip: do not use 'Nowadays' or 'hot topic' because they are too informal for academic essays.
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Move 2: Provide background information (you can put a definition here or in the Definition section)
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Move 3: Show how the background leads to the problem / issue
e.g. Due to this situation, ...

Move 4: State the objective / purpose
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Move 5: Outline the structure
e.g. This essay addresses main issues. These are:
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Definition (optional)

Write definitions of any terms that you want to define in the bigger of the two boxes below.
The definition should include the term you are defining; e.g. ' can be defined as...', and the type or category of thing it is.

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Definition content:

  1. Term, verb, description; e.g. 'Hong Kong is a world-class Asian city.'
  2. Term, verb, classification, what it is a type of; e.g. 'Hong Kong is a special administrative region of China.'

Optional additional definition content:

  • The importance of the term; e.g. 'Hong Kong has a population of nearly 7 million and has the sixth highest per-capita GDP in the world.'
  • Any common misunderstandings; e.g. 'The term 'Hong Kong' applies not only to the Special Administrative Region (SAR), but also to Hong Kong island, which is only one of the over-250 islands in the SAR. (Wikipedia (2025). )'
  • References for statements in the definition; e.g. Wikipedia (2025). '.
  • Examples; e.g. 'There is one other example of a special administrative region of China, and that is Macau.'
  • Controversies; e.g. 'The most suitable level of democratisation for Hong Kong has been controversial since 1997.'
  • It's development; e.g. 'Beginning as a trading port in the 19th century, Hong Kong has developed into a leading financial centre. Hong Kong was a crown colony of the United Kingdom from 1842 until the transfer of its sovereignty to the People's Republic of China in 1997. (Wikipedia (2025). )'
     

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Findings

Point 1

1.1     Make a topic sentence by filling in these fields:
1.1.1 Write or edit the ordering, hedging and organisation system words:

1.1.2 Write or edit the rest of the topic sentence:

1.2 Write or edit the details of point 1 in here:

Point 2

2.1     Make a topic sentence by filling in these fields:
2.1.1 Write or edit the ordering, hedging and organisation system words:

2.1.2 Write or edit the rest of the topic sentence:

2.2 Write or edit the details of point 2 in here:

Point 3

3.1     Make a topic sentence by filling in these fields:
3.1.1 Write or edit the ordering, hedging and organisation system words:

3.1.2 Write or edit the rest of the topic sentence:

3.2 Write or edit the details of point 3 in here:

Point 4

4.1     Make a topic sentence by filling in these fields:
4.1.1 Write or edit the ordering, hedging and organisation system words:

4.1.2 Write or edit the rest of the topic sentence:

4.2 Write or edit the details of point 4 in here:

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Discussion (Optional)

Compare the quality of the above arguments here:
e.g. "While the first argument seems persuasive, the second argument is better supported by evidence, and that evidence appears to be of higher quality."

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Conclusion

1. Re-state objective
e.g. In conclusion, in this essay the objective was

2. Summarise the main points
e.g. To summarise, main points have been covered,
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4. Evaluate evidence
Compare the quality of the different points that you have included above.

5. Express your view
e.g. "In my view," + clause; " Taking all these arguments into consideration, I believe that" + clause; or " My personal opinion is that" + clause.

6. Make recommendations or describe the future of the topic
e.g. "I recommend that" + clause; "I recommend" + _ing verb + ...; "This would result in" + noun phrase.

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3. Proof-read your Essay

The following functions will help you to proof-read your essay:
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4. Print your essay script

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5. Listen to part of the essay

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