Look at the following two titles that have been 'invented' to show the type of errors that should be avoided. Use the guidelines listed above to improve the titles and type an improved version in the boxes below.

A study of and investigation into the potential application of the use of design theorey in some shopping mall in Hong Kong


AN INVESTIGATIONS INTO THE SELL OF GM FOODS IN HK SUPERMARKETS


The following are examples of a number of final year project titles. Review them critically and consider if there are any improvements that could be made.

PURCHASING BEHAVIOUR TOWARDS INTERNET SHOPPING FOR APPAREL GOODS IN HONG KONG

Use of Complementary Health Practices by Cancer Patients

SECOND GENERATION VIDEO CODING FOR MULTIMEDIA APPLICATIONS

EFFECTIVENESS OF HONG KONG BUSINESS MAGAZINES

Correlation of Psychosocial Factors and Eating Attitudes Among Chinese Adolescents in Hong Kong

FAULT DETECTION AND DIAGNOSIS OF CHILLING SYSTEM

CRITERIA FOR INDOOR AIR QUALITY ON BUSES

BENCHMARKING HOTEL ENVIRONMENTAL PERFORMANCE

GenAI

Try GenAI. Ask PolyU or other GenAI tools for suggestions on the above titles. Remember to give the guidelines in your prompt and also ask for a reason for the suggested change. Finally, be critical with the GenAI suggestion. Is it really better than the original?